Hey Miles, beautifull works you have here, altho in this one
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...2&d=1241454090
Her bottom legs lack dmiension, try shading them more to give them the 3D feel, hope i helped.
Best wishes! ~Ice
Hey Miles, beautifull works you have here, altho in this one
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...2&d=1241454090
Her bottom legs lack dmiension, try shading them more to give them the 3D feel, hope i helped.
Best wishes! ~Ice
Thanks guys
Lyno yeah I think it does look a little off, still uncertain, but I won't be touching that piece again haha, thanks
Krato yeah, 16 2 months ago now, I keep the first post updated
Teundeboer thanks man :, haha yeah I really cant D:
jordy thanks man
SamC haha thanks man, yeah it is a little, think I fucked up while resizing it at some point D: cheers buddy
CamSkyo thanks man, I'm really glad you think so
cory haha, digging round my old threads are you , thanks man, I remember doin that and thinking it was good D:
jackpot yeah I think you are right, my perspective sucks D:
Metal-Mike cheers man
Jake ~Kobrin HARDEEEERR. Thanks dude, I think I might yeah, it sounds pretty coolAlso your artwork is teh win. Yeah I guess I'd rather do illustration so I try to force myself to practice that kinda stuff more.
lilnebo thanks girl, glad you like it!
agelaos haha thanksStill gotta keep pushing hard, I get to lazy :{
Chupacabra thanks manTake care
Icecold thanks man, good crit, they do lack form :/
Okay, well I've been actually busy :0 Its nice to not feel lazy for once but it also means I don't get much time for drawing. So its only really the scraps of stuff I could pull together from the last week. There is more but its at school.
So basically GCSE's suck, but the sooner they start, the sooner they are over and the sooner I have 3 months with absoulutely nothing to do except work on my artHopefully I can do a lot more freelance work
Thanks for all the support guys
There are some unfinished characters from imagination, a couple of studies, and some sketchy digital thing I might work on depending.
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Keep it up man your gona go far.
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stuffs nice m8 , like the drawings
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Ahhh stop getting so good. I really like the helmets in the digi, and really nice colours...but honestly how many soldiers wear dresses? Your pencils are rocking, I want to see you render different textures, metallic things especially since none of your characters really seem to have rendered reflective weapons or anything. Keepitup
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Yo man. Looking really neat. I love the look of the first one. Really damn sweet. Design works all well together. Second one is awesome as well. And yea so is the rest. Just as sam i also really like the helmet of ur digi. Really interesting look. My only comment is that sometimes especially in the first one your outlines are a little blocky. Get them more fluid. That will surely benefit your outline and there for you work. I know it's tempting to use straight lines for the nose and stuff especially when thickening the lines but do try to keep them smooth. Keep up the awesomeness
Cool work man
The only thing with that digi I think, is that it seems too cool, maybe the colours?
With the ship / zeppelin blowing up in the background.. it seems it should be more dramatic.
But that might be the feel you going for, 2 cool and calm soldiers ^_^ I dunno.
But its still awesome, keep it up.
That tree looks great. I really like the top portrait on the moleskine page![]()
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Man the colors on the last piece are very juicy, keep it up!
Seriously gorgeous, I really love it.
Your pencils are a whole new you level, thank you for the awesome inspiration with them.
And those portrait studies, just absolutely beautiful.
The digital is aweesome, the idea, colours and composition are spot on, should definatly improve on that, or maybe just tighten up some areas and leave the rest as loose as it is, nice feel to it all.
Keep at it
very nice sb, lots of improvement.
OmetA thanks haha
Krato :0
Giroge thank you sir
SamC thanks man. There are..different.. materials :{
jordy haha thanks man. Hmm, I kinda wanna do the opposite for a while, using tons of straight lines is a good way of trying to build structure, like zhang lu, who is insane http://you.video.sina.com.cn/b/11392790-1228943350.html . But yeah I definately agree they gotta be a bit more flowing as a whole
corza yeah the whole pic was a bit boring to be honest, I decided to start something else, but thanks for the tips
Quikenobi thanks man
Tugermilk thanks man, glad you think so
lilnebo haha thanks girl, um yeah I dunno, I don't really like that picture, too many mistakes :{ Thanks for all the support.
Krato thank you
Started some new thing, but I really can't work on it much. I've broken up for study leave, which means I'm not in school, but I gotta be doin tons of studying :0
So yeah something I knocked up in a few free hours yesterday, I should get round to finishing it.
Hahaha, poor Miles, it's like a drug to you. Looks cool so far, perhaps add some spaceships flying at her in high speed from in between those tall buildings. I'm a bit confused why there would be bare rock hovering over such a modern and tight grouped city tho. You'd think they would've gotten rid of that rock to build more fancy buildings. But I guess that's artistic freedom ^^ Cool characters too.
Hey mate, it's been a while i didn't post here ! Really great work ! your stuff is still impressing me ! Keep working on it ! Take care
Yea, you should get around to finishing it cause it's looking really good already. Only crit would be that she looks kinda defenseless without a weapon of some kind, she's a soldier afterall.![]()
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Ahh, that was too awesome
Awesome paint so far, you gotta finish it.
Love the lighting youve been playing with in recent paintings, looks awesome and moody, but dont overdo it.
her offhand's limpness strikes me as odd, given the tension of the rest of the pose.
Aight man that last one is awesome. I'm really digging the color scheme. Extra credit for that if u didnt use your overlays for that. That rim lighting works really well. The forearm that is holding the spear is just a lil bit too big. That's all i can really crit at this stage. And maybe give the part where her boobies are underneat more volume as it looks kinda flat like her boobs are being pancaked. Anyway keep it up man. And you definately should choose charmander.
I agree with the comments so far on this one, maybe turn that rock into a building or maybe its too late, also needs a weapon i think. But overall its looking rocking!, Good lights/darks and I like the color. NOte, if the flag is flying that much, shouldn't her hair be going in the same direction? Enough critiques, your stuff rocks.
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jeeeezus, excellent progress sir![]()
Now thats just frigin' awesome man! Hope you finish it mate!
great stuff
can't wait to see it finished![]()
This last one looks really epic!!
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last one is going to be good man, can't wait to see it done.
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awesome shit man, i gotta play catch up.
Keep rockin! You're fucking amazing.
whooa thanks guys 0_0, you're too kind (:
Sorry to be a dick but I'm gonna have to do replies some other time, I'm so tired right now, gettin late :0
Well, Basically no time atm for drawing :/ got exams and revision and all that shitAnyway it will all be over soon. So here is another shitty wip for the meantime. Thanks guys!
Removed, wip further down![]()
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