Laboratory #71

[Solo Alien]

Ummm... Good day everyone!
It`s my first post here, after long time since joining CA.
Looking at aversome and just good works - I`m got power to finish one of my latest works.
In that illustration, for sci-fi novell collection, I used mixed techniques - 3d render + polishing in Photoshop.
Critique are welcome

P.S. Sorry for my english.

[JKOR]

That's sweet. Love the dark eerie feeling it gives off.

[Solo Alien]

Thank you! I`m was reaaly glad to hear that kind of comment
Especially, when onlooker see same mood as I planned to place in work.

[Rascar Capac]

I love the feel/mood of this piece.
What would help I think is some nice hard edges in the right places cause it looks a bit blurry all over. Also, some textures and grit to get away from the 3d render look. And adding another color, maybe a red here and there on the gadgetry would help bring it too life.
I think its almost there - now comes the fun part of dressing it up or decaying it a bit - depends on how you look at it...

[-leo]

Hey man welcome to FF section! Neat work, personally I think it would works great as bg shot for some animation. Keep it up and post more!

[Solo Alien]

Rascar Capac

Hmm... you are right. I`ll certainly try your advices!
Work definitely need some contrast in colors. Not only on gadgetry, but some dingy light from monitor from left too...
The problem is - I`m bad in overlaping textures. That why I use simple render...

-leo

Thank you!