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    Reiem is offline One-Winged Angel Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
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    Mist

    spring mist
    the lake reflects
    trees and sky

    just some sketch. I didn't mean to do it, that's why I started with a dull brush in the leftmost foreground tree and ended up with something different at the other end. As I say, I didn't mean it, she just took me away.
    Advices and tips and hard critiques are welcome!
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    well, right now it's kinda bland. one thing i noticed is that it's kinda hard to tell that it's among a misty type fog by the water. you might wanna add more indication to be able tell that it's foggy.

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    I suggest taking a look at Jack Hamm's drawing landscapes/scenery book -it has some great references for drawing trees.

    My sketchbook is here

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    I suggest Bob Ross and his amazing happy trees.
    I used to watch that man every time he came on the television when I was a kid.

    As for a crit. I agree with BigZam. You can't really notice the fog all that well. And... the trees look a little too simple, but that could be what you were going for, so pardon me if it was.

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