Speaking over Tea

[teiae]

First post here and I'm a bit nervous! But looking forward to what I'll learn as I'm sick of just being patted on the back with no real help.

I know this picture has a heaping load of anatomy problems, it's my major weakpoint. If anyone wants to do a drawover it would be wonderful!

Oh yeah, and I should mention, the glow is because both women are goddess', the one on the right is my friends character, the left is mine.

So please, don't be TOO harsh!

[EmiR]

hi,
hmm... the picture have a own style, but the wall in the background is not in the same style. i dont know why you do that?
you use only about 10 colors, IMO too unter. the candle have good details. try to put details in the other things, but dont go over the top.
back to the colors: dont take the same color for hair, clothes and ground. its ok to use red for all three things, but dont use exactly the same.
the glow: try to make the two girls brighter and the other things darker, so you get the same efect, without the ... glow.
i hope the tipps will help you.

[teiae]

hi,
hmm... the picture have a own style, but the wall in the background is not in the same style. i dont know why you do that?
you use only about 10 colors, IMO too unter. the candle have good details. try to put details in the other things, but dont go over the top.
back to the colors: dont take the same color for hair, clothes and ground. its ok to use red for all three things, but dont use exactly the same.
the glow: try to make the two girls brighter and the other things darker, so you get the same efect, without the ... glow.
i hope the tipps will help you.

Now THATS what I've been wanting! I should have used a different red for the rug now that I look at it, if I revisit the piece I'll be sure to do that!

I'm not to happy with the same shade of red with the woman on the right, but it was mostly the design the person gave to me (although thats not at all an excuse, just more of a pointing out, I really hope I'm not sounding snobby!) The one on the right though I agree, I should revisit her design and change some of the colours.

Anyway, thank you very much! I appreciate it!