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    In Need of Help with Landscape Painting

    This is one of my first serious digital painting landscapes. Help with taking this further would be great.
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    Do ask for specific help if you need any, you are sure to get more response and obviously better help!

    One big think I would concentrate on is using value effectively, at the moment things are very close in value and perhaps a bit arbitrarily so. Squint and you will see what I mean a bit better. A good guideline to experiment with, but perhaps not be bound to is place a dark object near a light area and a light area near a dark object. Think about a solid lightsource, and how you could use areas to your advantage. You could put the white bunny in shadow, or a darker field. Also, a greater variety of values will add interest; variety is the spice of life after all.

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    Ok, thanks for the help! I tried adding more contrast in value, not sure if it's enough though...

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    I think it felt a little cramped so I added a bit to the sides. Anyone think the foreground tree is awkward or that the picture seems unbalanced? I'm not sure what else to do other than paint in more contrast.
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