really could use some crit pls..
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really could use some crit pls..
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A lots of great stuff in here slayer! I don´t have any crits on the last one, I like it a lot! keep it up, I will keep an eye on this thread![]()
that last drawing is horny good. if you want to know what to improve on it, i
would make the cheek on the shadow side a little darker.
btw, i think your birds are fantastic.
k.. thx both.. will see u tomorow![]()
Dude, rock on, best wishes from Germany.
PS: I just don't dig the military themes, but each to his own, right?
Dude, I'm sooo serious.
I can't offer any crits here since i'm not to experianced with this stuff sadly. but its looking very nice at the mo.
the right side of the face, the cheek there should be darker.
you should lighten up the mustash alittle at the left corner of his mouth
and the grin distortion thing on his chin should be moved in alittle... to far away
add the rest of his head, helps to see the balance i think.
anyways, just random shitcomment
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wow guys, thx alll... umm.. i promise to answer tomorow to all, i'm really tired now, i've done a horrible downhill run with a bike so i'm kinda over![]()
Wow slayer, great work my dude, your sketches and line quality is really improving. I really like the quick animal sketches, bridgman studies are always good to see. Your last portrait, quality, I can see you really put a lot of energy in that last piece. Looking at the portriat study, other than small nit picky things, the his left cheek is a bit wide in relation to the painting, but its nothing that hurts the structure. I would have outlined the shape of the left side, even if you weren't going to shade it in, show that you see it. Good work man. Sorry I haven't been posting and critiquing, Ashrumm and I are visiting the parents and in a wedding this weekend. Will be back posting on monday.
Keep up the good work
yeh good work , no crits here because the ones i had have been said so keep it up
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u made his left cheek a bit too long in the lower area...anywho it rocks![]()
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LoydID - thx 4 droppin your first post in herecheers.
MadCat - thx man, glad to hear from u
Hurricane - aknowledged, i will repari the satyr as soon as i have some spare time.. got some f***ed-up exams comin so .. it'l be a month i guesscheers dude, thx for droppin by..
Guggenmaneuver - really been missing you joelhow are things? keep it up with ur sb.. i saw some cool stuff in there. cheers, friend.
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Cigaro - yeah, ratonu' comenteazathx 4 the crit, will have it in mind
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Oh... wow! Sorry man, I got nothing in the way of crits... To me everything looks great. I'm a big fan of pencils myself so I'm loving your SB! Sooo nice, and that lettering, oh my.
Great pencil work playboy!! One thing I will say is on the painting study you did the right cheeck bone may be a bit exagerated although it is exaggerated in the painting you may have did it too much. Good work though keep it coming.
Geez i cannot say enough about those damn owls!!!The spawn sketches are pretty slick as well keep it coming man i've got to get to work!!
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May I say, Very fucking nice? Well I did, so there ya go.
Just viewed your sb from beginning to end, I have to say, beautiful work, waiting for some updates.
Only crit is to keep working on Anatomy and proportions, your volume and value skills are great, now just work on refining anatomy and proportions![]()
wow, thx to all of you..
umm, i'll be out for some time but i'll be back with anger. see you in some weeks guys. cheers![]()
Good. Keep posting.
keep up the posting. really nice stuff here.
so little time for drawing ..
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lovely anatomy sketches and master studys
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wow you have an awesome sense for toe - the contrast in your drawings rocks! but line quality is also amazing makes the stuff really come to life! gotta draw more
thx guys...
sorry 4 posting so rarely.. it's been hell around school.
hello hello, back with some more pencilfreaking..
i'm into something i'm not allowed to post yet, but this is some extra stuff, hope u dig..
industrial stuff..
animal stuff
ballpoint pen stuff [no ref. portrait + marko fan art]
same model again, my girlfriend. enjoy!
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Wolverine and http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b1...pphp1efLL9.jpg
looks really cool![]()
Hey guys i guess it's time to leave the past behind so i'm kicking off with a new sketchbook.
I hope u'll enjoy my work...
Please feel free to crit!
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