character design:cg in progress

[askia]

here it is c&c

[nuki]

here is c&c.

-Feather out lines less
-Its a 12 year old housewife holding an axe
-shes cross eyed
-try to get more action in there + a background

seriusly, if you plan to get replys and help dont just throw a pic and four cold words in here

thanks

[askia]

why do i always get critique by a person whos drawings look like crap oh and the houswife/warrior u mentioned was excately the concept i was trying to acheive is this enough words for u

[Zweit]

guh... you can't dismiss a crit based on the crit giver's skill. it doesn't take a master to see something wrong.

she looks like she's leaning foreward, for one thing. her arms appear to be different lengths. her right hand appears to be really huge. anatomy needs work and all that, the usual routine. the colors are all really saturated and pastel-ey, replace that weapon thing with a basket of eggs and i'd swear the painting was Easter themed. desaturate the palate a bit, it'll be easier to look at.

there doesn't look like there's anything attaching that blade to the handle...


remember that there's a lot of wisdom to benifit from at this site, try not to brush off people just because they're trying to learn too. :|

[nuki]

why do i always get critique by a person whos drawings look like crap oh and the houswife/warrior u mentioned was excately the concept i was trying to acheive is this enough words for u

-I was just telling you to give us more information about the pic...you could've told us that u were goin for a housewife/warrior look for example
-You felt attacked personally because I gave you the c&c you were asking for
-You say my pieces are crap, then well me why you dislike them or just hold off your comment. Stuff like "this is crap" is not desired here for it does not help anyone.
-As Zweit allready said: The drawing skill does neither say anything about a persons ability to see errors or possible improvements nor his impression. This is a free, learning community, Its members help each other because they say what they think
-If I hadnt replied you would be bumping this thread now


-nuki