Looking for critiques

[jtran]

My friend suggested I post up this recent pic (done a few days ago) on here in hopes that I can get some professional criticism. This is a redesign of 2 of my friends' characters on the game, "City of Heroes". Anyways, I hope you like!



*waits to get schooled*

[Raul Tabajara]

Very good drawn, and beautfull vivid colors!

I think that the left arm of the cat woaman looks like wrong. I now that is correct but looks like wrong... Like a broken arm. Whon is a drawn will be hard to change, i know, but try! Will be still better

And, try to blend another colors in the same object. near the light areas try put put Yelows, and in the mid-shadow-ares, try to change the Hue. Your color is a little uniform. try to mix more color!

[kawakaze]

i would not call myself a professional and i am color blind so what i say may be completely irrelevant but i feel like my eyes are struggling to find a focal point. i know that it is the characters but i still find my eyes wandering more than they should. try to single them out more. perhaps darken up the values on the border/wall, the buildings behind them, and maybe even some darker defined shadows on the characters. that will make them glow/stand out a little more. if u added some more environment in the mid ground that might give them some mroe presence as well. but overall this is very well drawn and great vivid colors that even i can see=D awsome work.

[Wasp_One]

... *waits to get schooled*

@jtran: First and farmost an impressive post. Good critiques above. Use and incorporate it if you decide to touch it up or re-do it.

As for my own critique, ... plausibility. Eventhough you've ventured into fantasy characters, often ones succes in it's plausibility. Especially with humanoid or -like characters or beings.

I used to be an assistant archery instructor, so the only advice I can give you is to revise the arrow and handpositions of the 'left' character. If you don't want to comprimise the composition or the body exposure; at least fix the arrow and put it in it's place.



You've exhibitted talent and promise. Goodjob! Lookin' forward to more of your work.

[jtran]

I see, I see. Thanks for the crits, guys! =)

[RaistlinTheDark]

Plz rate me on this img, i made it a few days ago...If u have any suggestions tell me!pld: Oh ya forgot to make image smaller...but plz give me any suggestions u might have on it, ty. :I

[Wasp_One]

Plz rate me on this img, i made it a few days ago...If u have any suggestions tell me! [ .. ]

@RaistlinTheDark: I would, however; it seems you've misplaced this post. You're 'in' jtran his thread.