when you're strange, faces come out of the rain

[catface]

As-wire, nice updates, those mouths are looking fantastic. I hope you are taking it upon yourself to draw from life and photos, more than drawing from your head. Even painting objects will help You understand how light works, and forms better. don't stop drawing! post #50 is fucking sweet.

[NicoRaven]

Cool bean cool beans you have a phuky style. I wont repeat what others have said about study anatomy and such.

Fat ass slap and keep posting..............

[DanielC]

Good!
The faces are getting better. The proportions on the profiles are easier to read.
Though i think doing some life studies like you did earlier would help you lots.
Keep going !

[asoir]

the thread is already quite high, so this isnt technically a bump, was quite fond of this sketch so it's a just a little addition.

prep for a longer piece!

will reply next time!

[Goog]

cool style you've got goin on. Love the pen and ink stuff.

[DannySketch]

hey man theres a really nice style you have got developing in some of these this one reminds me of an illustration i saw in the guardian!very nice, keep up with the studys
good work

[krakel]

wow dude... slow down!!! drawing a lot is always good but bustin out 20 drawings a day just for the sake of it wont get you as far as it could...

Take your time... Check what you did wrong the last time.. and then do it right or better in your next drawing!

+the standard advice that you should still take very seriously: Study anatomy, study light, study perspective- aand try drawing with a more continuous line.. your broken lines sometimes cause your forms to distort...

keep going but thing about where you are going!

[paperX]

thanks for the encouraging comment in my sketchbook...you keep working hard too, i can see you improving...but as others have said...try to spend more time on each piece correcting errors you see and such, learning from mistakes can be sometimes the most helpful

[blog]

nice title. energetic update. sweet ass mike tyson sig quote.

[asoir]

edit-double whoops,
replies:
kanoa- thanks, i need to do a life paint soon...
nico- thanks!!
dan- as usual, cheers old bud =]
goog-
danny- hey man, thanks!
krakel- you got me thinking, man, i'm getting thy ass in gear. thanks a lot!
paperx- thanks, yeah i've always been a one night stand artist, leave it forever. i need to get back into stuff, thanks
blog- he is quite the intellectual


whoops.
procrastinating marco kicked in, sorry all about the laziness recently.
done a head study from Ignacio Zuloaga
and a piece.
longer stuff!
woot. ;P
more to come. LAZINESS = DEAD.

ergh lame scan, but you get the gist.

[blog]

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1165851429

wow really love this one marco, keep it up man!

[DanielC]

Nice work man !!!
raaahh! want to see more like that head study. Keep working hard !!

[asoir]

thanks guys!

edited version of samurai guy, unfortunately im moving on and not working on it anymore,i've learnt what i needed and im proceding =]

wip master study,
anton van dyck

[asoir]

whoopsy forgot these little things!
post its rule

[DanielC]

Hey marco !
Nice studies and pages... show us some more!!
Dunno what happened to you, but those studies are looking great.
Keep it up monsieur !

[asoir]

haha, thanks dan! i decided to get into gear a bit =]
and i just saw i got 1k views, thanks all

[Zynic]

Hey there Asoir
Cool updates!
That master-study is awesome! Do more of those, and make sure that you let us see them ;D

[Snarfevs]

Hi!

You've got some interesting stuff happening, but there's this weird dissonance of quick-and-messy scribbles of barely connected forms and skillfully executed pieces. Definite improvement over your previous sketchbook however!

I do absolutely love the brown one on Dec 12!

[Dile_]

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...1&postcount=73

Dile is very impressed, Dile love that update, Dile see you took time, Dile belive
thats good

man!!! thats awesome, best by far! and the facials look sooooo much better !
Good work man, keep those up!

~Dile

[Tigermilk]

hey man, thanks for dropping by my SB..
nice faces in this one - http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...&d=1166012027S
Keep on doing these studies, it pays off.
cheers!
tiger

[asoir]

not only did i fuck up the master but i scanned in this next one terribly

zynic - thanks!
snarf- hey man, yeah i've always had a hard time tightening stuff up, even my rendered stuff looks loose =/ thanks for the advice and praise!
dennis- haha, 3rd person, huh den thanks
tiger- cheers!!

[asoir]

lame stuff! yay

[asoir]

hey all, would normally wait till tomorrow to post this, but i personally love it so its going up now!

ps. i suck at frontal feet =p

[asoir]

coloured the jock, straightened him out too, speedy and the never posted tdome entry! (sucks)

[DanielC]

The first colored guy is looking good. Nice and clean.
The enviro is interesting. But show some variations in the sky, like telling us from where the light comes from etc...
On the Td piece.. be careful with the lips !!! (avoid outlining them too much )
Keep it up !

[asoir]

the reason im updating so soon is because i'd like some crits on this sp.
got the pic for ref just to actually give you something to base it upon
and a new inked sketch =]

thanks dan, yeah the lips are a bit nutty i know ;P

[j a k e]

Hey dude. With the unposted TD piece, just a few nitpicky things. The lips on both of the main characters is out of perspective, as you can see with the little centre dippy bit. Also, the glasses on the old man are off too, if you look at a person side-on with glasses, the lense is just flat, or pretty much. Whereas you've made it almost like a front view. One more little thing sorry, heh, is the red well? Is it luminous?

On the other hand, the colours are nice, and very interesting how you used the texture on the old guys face.
Keep it up dude, good progress with the digis.

edit: oo the SP. well, the eyes are a tad crooked. Good values though. I think you've made your nose a tad too big, and the face a little too wide. Can't wait to see how it turns out!

[asoir]

Hey dude. With the unposted TD piece, just a few nitpicky things. The lips on both of the main characters is out of perspective, as you can see with the little centre dippy bit. Also, the glasses on the old man are off too, if you look at a person side-on with glasses, the lense is just flat, or pretty much. Whereas you've made it almost like a front view. One more little thing sorry, heh, is the red well? Is it luminous?

On the other hand, the colours are nice, and very interesting how you used the texture on the old guys face.
Keep it up dude, good progress with the digis.

edit: oo the SP. well, the eyes are a tad crooked. Good values though. I think you've made your nose a tad too big, and the face a little too wide. Can't wait to see how it turns out!

haha, the TD entry is DRIPPING with flaws, was too lazy and too ambitious.
crits taken into account, the well is supposed to be luminous yes.
again, the mouth is truly fucked up and the glasses...well

thanks man!

[asoir]

haven't managed to get back into the sp but for gods sake i WILL.

some sketches

with the woman charcoal:

i went over it, even though i felt it was quite a nice study to help me get braver...need stuff to be bold so i made the hasty decision of possible ruinment

ordered some new books too =]

ps. the sitting woman was a mind sketch, hence the amount of lines...

[Listing]

Some interesting work. Don't put it down. You're definitely on your way.