trick or treat

**elstabo** · November 1st, 2006, 03:57 PM

my season greetings to everyone...

**Doomgriever** · November 3rd, 2006, 11:23 AM

i totally dig the evilness of the corpses eyes!! ^_^ great work

**crisis** · November 3rd, 2006, 03:01 PM

she looks kinda one-eyed, maybe a little darker shadow were the eye should be.

**JL.Alfaro** · November 3rd, 2006, 03:54 PM

This is pretty cool brother, I like your taste in women models- a lil thicker is always a lil more natural and IMO little sexier too.

My only crit is that you shoulda posted this in the sketches area.

**chaosrocks** · November 3rd, 2006, 04:18 PM

value..... needs value... blacks, middle greys value composition.....is very very pale, should have strong values to go with a strong subject..ok?

chaos

**Cookiedough** · November 4th, 2006, 02:24 PM

How about some flying bats and a moon in the top area?

Great zombies. Her corset seems a li'l plain atm, maybe add some textures or some lace somehere? Pretty girl too.

**jackenstein** · November 5th, 2006, 01:48 PM

Needs more value, and I think the zombie on the far left should be more engaged in the busty madam. She's obviously enchanting the rest of the corpses, why is he not affected (unless he's gay?)

**Johanna Saarenpää** · November 5th, 2006, 05:53 PM

Now this is overall a well made drawing, but as mentioned before it needs more value, also her right hand's ringfinger looks sort of broken. The fingers on her left hand looks more delicate than those on her right. And I am a bit confused about the perspective of the pillar/fence in the background.