Razorb's Game Art Sketchbook !

[Doomgriever]

Thanx, and yeah i do, in sweden at Playgroundsquad, will do internship at Starbreeze (creators of The Darkness) this winter! It's gona be great fun!

[jedininjaman]

the sketch titled 1B of the goblin is sweet
Like your style and im digging the looseness in your lines
but yours heads seem a little small in comparison to your bodies so ya keep that in mind
but nice imagination

[Niva.]

http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...6&d=1193347041

This is one of your best full scene paintings, it's really good scene. I think you should correct the knees/lower leg positioning. Also someone said something about upping the contrast which would be a really good idea. Basic idea is to perhaps darken the foreground a bit more while still upping the contrast and maybe slightly lightening the background a bit though you may not need it depending on how the first part goes, it will help. Very close to a masterpiece.

I really like your style and the bloody critters and perverse atmosphere, keep it up, 4*s from me for the entertainment factor.

[Cold]

You still alive?

[MeTaL-Mike]

very nice progress in here. keep it up man.

[Razorb]

Wooooooo its been like ages ! since ive posted in here ... and i havent really done much 2d work to be honest !! ... ive been really concentrating on 3d for when i apply to get a job in a game company ;o ! anyways ... on wit the replies.

GOBLINSHARK: ("yeah don´t be afraid to simplyfy the sketches , detail can always can be added on the important parts in the end") ! yea i totally totally understand this now haha i guess noobies like me just get carried away sometimes ! but im glad u liked that last pic man THANKS FOR STOPPIN BY !

Cold: yar im alive biatch ! anyways u just gone offline on msn ! lazy twat

Doomgriever: thanks man ! and yea im too lazy to finish most of my things ;( but good luck with the intern dude ! i cant wait to get a job in ANY company ! hah

jedininjaman: yea ... i seem to have this wierd fetish with pea heads ! hehe thanks mate

n1va: yea yea the contrast thing everyone keeps telling me ! if i open that pic again.. i will fix it thanks for all the kind words hehe glad u were entertained !

MeTaL-Mike: hah yea i still remember how i used to be ! even worse than i am now hah... yea.. hard to believe eh ?

now on to some really lazy artwork ! ;o






3d!!

[Chermilla]

Hiya. Great 3D enviro on the last post! I'm just starting to take a stab at trying to learn some 3D so am finding others peoples 3D work more and more inspirational, especially now that I know so much more about the work involved! I'm also liking the beast like character in post #216, he's really nice. The mech woman 4th down in the same post is by far the strongest I think, lovely slick design...liking the legs on that one, looks like she could run pretty fast even though her armour is pretty hench looking. Maybe you could try taking that design further so she looks even more streamlined and perhaps lighter armour would suit better?

Take Care,

Cx

[Razorb]

Thank youuuu and yea i probably should sort out the chunky armour.. but i dont really have time hehe got too much work to do ! modeling, concepts, writing design documents and pitch documents ! :o lots and lots !and deadlines gettin closer hehe ! thanks for the comment first one in a while

another sketch ;o

[l0stinth0ughts]

hey razorb, very nice and sick sketchbook you got here man, i really dig your imagination part also. i dont know if i can critique anything but ill give it a shot, i would prolly say do more anatomical studies and more of your characters will be more believeable. i look forward to some more post of yours. ALSO I WANNA SEE MORE BLOOD, GUTS, FINGERS, AND TOES!! hope this helps

[Razorb]

l0stinth0ughts: yea your totally right about the anatomy thing ! shame i dont really draw that much anymore ! im really concentrating on 3d now ;( or i would spend alot longer with my studies heh thanks for stopping by !

another sketch ;o !

[cout<mecha]

Hello Razor,

Still suffering from sketchbook envy, yet I able to say that this is one of the better ones that I've seen. I'd love to see some of your stuff animated. What are you doing right now?

Stop by and visit if you will. I hope to see more of your stuff as I subscribe!

[Alexandr Pascenko]

damn , how did u got that good so fast with the digi skillz?? i wonder
good updates , keep em coming!

[Mattinian]

the last one is all nice and misty :] you could try strenghtening the values of the dude and make`em stand out more, and adding some more detail to that gun of his, it`s looks like a soft pillow with handles. not hard and threatening like a real gun :]

[TOOLED!]

im really digging that second last one- he has a good creep vibe, gw. i think your last chick needs some refinement on her lower half... other than that, i'm diggin the textures your bringing into your paint.

[Chermilla]

Liking the second to last post update! He's great.
I know what you mean about deadlines, just met a tricky one myself...so very tired hehe, but it's usually worth all the hard work in the end right?

Take it easy...if you can!

Cx

[strybjorn]

this is a wicked sketchbook with a really excellent development and a nice variety of styles.

for a small crit, the form on the last two sketches seem a little drop off in a couple of places - mainly on the shoulder pads... the highlights that you paint dont reinforce the description of the form and as a consequence the figure doesnt read as well as it could

i love this one as well as this one - two completely different styles, but both extremely well excecuted!

i will be keeping an eye on how this sketchbook progresses

[Flutic]

Really nice sb you've got here, nice characters colors and the last 3d render is well textured and lid nicely.

Keep them coming!

Greets,Tom

[Steven1991]

i really like your characters alot. I only think that your 3d is very flat because it seems to have no depth in the wooden planks/wall.

[Reject-D]

great improvement from your first couple pages good job!! keep it coming!

[Alleycat]

I like it! This is like real game-concept art, good techniques too!
post more!

[Razorb]

Hey everyone ! finishing university in like a month.. and then hopefully startin work.. well im looking for work at the minute so i made my portfolio website n such to get started ;o so have a look and tell me what u think ! it will help
oh yea i havent finished the concept art section yet

www.Razorb-art.com

cout<mecha: heh thanks alot ! yea ive animated a few things recently actually my first animations infact ! will soon post a video on here sooner or later hehe

Alexandr Pascenko: hah nah i aint improved well actually i feel that i have a little... not much tho.. but i think it happend because i took a step back from drawing.. i dont worry too much about it now ;O coz im concentrating on 3d .. i dont get stressed over drawing as much heh.. i dunno maybe it helped :p

Mattinian: ow what pic are u talkin about ? :o

TOOLED!: thanks alot and ya i didnt like her boots so much ;( i tried something a ll diffrent with the model i did of her

Chermilla: heh yea deadlines ive got an insane one in 2 weeks funfunfun eh ? cant wait to start a proper job tho hah ! thanks for stoppin by

strybjorn: thanks for the crits n comments... and i completely agree with the shoulder pads i will defo try to avoid that with my next pic thank you !

Flutic: thank you thank you heh

Sky_Eagle: awwww hope this next one is better

Reject-D: thanks mate ive seen that alot with u too ! keep it up

Alleycat: more coming ! heh thank you!

The woman i concepted earlier is now modeled and rigged ;o made with psp stats in mind

Environment for my final University project

aaaand a sketch while i listen to my gf natter on the phone ! heh hope she dont read this ;(

[Jackwhat]

Ah harrrrrrrr, ive been here once or twice before too!

Youve really come a long way since you started posting thats for sure, your models in particular are looking really nice, even though theyre lowpolyed the sexy textures more than compensate and add loads of detail!

How was your bout with Uni? I was going to a uni in Norfolk studying games art and design... although i remain self taught.

Most of my art dates back to a similar amount of time as your thread, hopefully when i start posting on polycount ill have something more respectable to be known by :3

[Razorb]

heh Jackwhat yea get postin more shiiiit :> tis al funfunfun! maaaan uni is goin quite shite to be honest... got another 91 pages to write in 2 days :> hehehehe I CAN DO IT ! i just gotta eat pro plus like tic tacs ;o .... anyways ! some random speedy work i dont recently for my psp type game heh ;o



yea this one is kinda random ;o

[DARAF]

HAHA cool tit head. I like your work man.

[fantasyartist]

Great stuff man! I specially like your 3d models. It's good to see that you are working more from a game design point of view. Looking forward for more.

[Razorb]

thanks guys! some other random pics ;o oh yea i finally got a job in the games industry! as an environment artist ! not 2d ofcourse hehe

[sourgasm]

This sketchbook is really impressive in scope. Very inspirational stuff. Your 2d is great and you have a working knowledge of actual game mechanics. You're going to have a badass job

[Jackwhat]

Wahhh dude, congrats on landing a job! fuck, ive not even started looking yet as i dont really have the confidence at all so ill give that a rest till ive got a better lookin portfolio up! :3

Whered you land this dream job? if you can say that is heh...

[Noch]

LOL I like the lactating breast head beast. Sic painting style too.

[Verehin]

super! keep posting