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This is my first attempt to show anything here (bit nervous) so I'm not sure if it'll actually work. Anyway here goes... this is a page from a comic I produced recently. I've been doing editorial and corporate illustration but I'm new to comics. Any and all comments welcome. Cheers
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hi and welcome!
could you describe whats going on in the page, i don´t understand what´s happening.
figures are also a little too stiff.
do you have more pages?
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The scene is a stand-off between the long-haired 'baddy' and the hero. There is a verbal exchange, but in panel 3 we find out the hero has been drugged. Panel 4 shows the baddy's sarcastic response to this. The hero collapses and the baddy walks off. His intention had been to (try to) kill the hero but now he won't have to.
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The body language of the characters isn't telling the story as well as it should. The guy who is reeling could be reeling a lot more actively. Also, at first glnce I couldn't tell the faces of the two characters apart.
Ooooh, now I'm getting the transition between the first and second panel. I hadn't realized that the camera switches perspectives there.
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