thoughts on "iffy"s...
i think you should put the last "iffy", the back of the woman standing, in for the man leaning back on the stool with his foot on the box.
the man's face structure is off, making it appear distorted. also, the lower leg that's on the box is misproportioned. it's too short. there doesn't seem to be a big enough heel on the foot, giving the ankle a weird bend. even if it was hanging over the side of the box it wouldn't bend forward like that becuase of the achiles tendon.
the last of the "iffy" bunch, definitely looks like more of an art piece. the way you handled the rendering helps it stand on its own. there is also a nice feeling about it and there aren't any major flaws to it. that's what you have to remember when submitting your portfolio to anywhere, especially for a job... you're only as good as your weekest piece.
oh, a couple more popped up... the second of the good ones, the males face... i would leave here out. again, the face sturcture does not look right. if you want to replace her you can use the three faces of the man, or the woman sitting on the stool.
as for the man sitting on the chair, i have to disagree with jester here. this is probably my favorite out of all of your drawings here. i like the face, probably your best fact out of all of these, structurally. also, i can "feel" how he is sitting and the weight. i do agree that the you could have worked on the chair a little more, but you did a great job with the "suggestion" of the chair. definitely leave this one in.
very impressive work, ink. a hell of a lot better than the portfolio that got me into ringling. i'm sure you will get in.
Last edited by empty; June 5th, 2003 at 04:59 PM.