This Kid's Got style. (shoes)

[artmaker]

one of the paintings i did for my 30day artist run.

[Jason Rainville]

Hmm, are you done with this? If so, you may want to move this over to the crit section to really tap into the 'crit crowd' Looks pretty good though, nice loose style. I'd like to see some more points of defenition to add some focus though.

[makoblue]

Exactly what Rhineville said really (including the crit section). It has a nice style going on but looks a little too dull. Try adding highlights or maybe little bursts of more bold colour.