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    Her left foot seems really short.

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    Just a personal thing, but his jaw jutting out to our left isnt really reading. It kindof makes his face look like it is on crooked.

    Not too harsh. I like them

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    the shadows contrast well w/ the overall colors of the pieces, but the first thing that bugged me was the reflection in the pitch black eye (along w/ the lack of an eyelid). the shadow on the bill of the hat says the light is coming from the top left, the shadow on the nose says the light is coming from high center, and the eye reflection says the light is coming from high left *(all our perspective).

    other than that very nice pieces. they're a little flat, but it's a style and i like it so far.

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