Assassin Wip

[StealthNachos]

Was just wondering what might be done to finish off the initial sketch for this. I still have a mouse because Tablets are expensive, so it took me a good 35 min just to get this down.
Crits and comments are encouraged.



Edit: Made the changes you were talking about, because that arm thing was in fact impossible. Changed the blade, and now I'm playing around with some colors.

Edit 8/10: Been working on it a bit more. Going to change the daggers completly, but I've started rendering the darks. I'm not to sure about the purple light there, but I may keep it. Crits and Comments encouraged.

Edit 8/11: Started setting up some highlights, though not in thier final colors, still working on darks and made a stand in dagger until I decide on one. Made a few skew and scale adjustments as well.

[Xplode]

very good drawing for a mouse, have you ever considered buyin a scanner though?
my only crits are with the hands/arms/knives... the blade of the knife in the outstreched arm looks too wide, and it needs a handle... i see what you were trying to do with the arm sticking out in the back (that is an arm, yes?), but the position you have it in is awkward at best and maybe impossible... if you want that [pse you need to change the point of view so we see the assaasin from the back, not from the front...

[StealthNachos]

You were right about the arm so I decided to move it, and added the end of the handle.

[StealthNachos]

Nother update.

[Xplode]

much better, i like what you did wiith the other arm
the purple dagger seems a bit out of place though...
other than that, no crits

[StealthNachos]

I'm not going to keep that, it's just a stand in. I'm still trying to come up with a dagger I like. But, thanks for the crits, they helped.

[Neev]

I think I'd tone down the purple of the knife, as you were considering doing. Nothing wrong with it being purple, but definitely needs a more muted tone, I think. Otherwise, I think this is coming out really good...I like her design a lot.