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**Temujin** · July 31st, 2006, 09:20 AM

hello everyone
here is concepts for adventure game called "Alternativa" and my personal works.
...please add some comments here....

...my website:
http://www.temujin.cz

**Doomgriever** · July 31st, 2006, 10:21 AM

wow u are quite skillfull! alternativa sounds interesting, what is it about? (no crits

too good to be critizized)

**Cloister** · July 31st, 2006, 10:25 AM

Not much to comment about. Very solid work. Very clean and pretty. Great light, and nice spaces. The piece with the giant clock is my favourite. Perhaps the small airplane looks a little goofy... Another angle, maybe?
Great logo!

**THUNDERCOCK** · July 31st, 2006, 10:36 AM

yeah yeah...nice stuff...really sharp with the perspective. There's something about the stone face in the first post that gets at me though. I dunno...maybe it seems a little too cartoonish considering its surroundings. That face is the focal point of the whole piece...I would really play it up. Maybe add a little texture or wear from age and abuse...maybe a little something. Only suggestions though. Anyone else out there feel the same?

**shadoman** · July 31st, 2006, 11:07 AM

This is some amazing stuff. Your website work is astounding. You have a great ability to do high-tech design stuff and organic illustrations. Great work.

**speedster** · July 31st, 2006, 11:35 AM

Some amazing stuf. Do you mind sharing some tips on how you approach the painting of each piece?

**Kalango** · July 31st, 2006, 01:52 PM

Realy good man, nice pics and congrats for your website.

**Bowlin** · July 31st, 2006, 04:58 PM

These look like your best pictures yet. Keep it up man.

**SwimmingArtist09** · July 31st, 2006, 05:57 PM

Absolutely amazing work here. Its has that look that just leaves you in awe.

**Verithin** · July 31st, 2006, 06:36 PM

Be careful when you flip artwork to improve composition / drama... your clock numbers are backwards. Still some great lighting and mood in these pieces...

**Deke N. Wilkins** · July 31st, 2006, 07:10 PM

Great stuff. A bit clean but could be a stylistic choice.

**Main Loop** · July 31st, 2006, 08:43 PM

i love the clock one! great!

**The Editor** · August 1st, 2006, 12:06 PM

Your work is great but it has a strong similarty to the concept design of the Prince of Persia games, If you'd ask me i'd tell you it was a PoP design.

**Phuzion** · August 1st, 2006, 01:19 PM

It's nice work so far!
I feel like the details could be pushed more though. I like what you're doing with the geometry, but that should just be a simple starting point, simillar to a gesture drawing before a rendered piece. You're on the right track, but you still need to take it to the next level and start thinking about specific surfaces: glossy, semi gloss, matte; rough, smooth, dusty, wet, dry etc. Right now it's the same surface over the entire piece on all of them. And I'm not sure if the noise is a PS texture, or if that's a result of the 3D render, but it's lending to that generic surface thing I'm talking about. I agree that the clock piece is the best one.

But I do love all the lighting and the overall feel... just need to go that extra bit.

Peace,

**Temujin** · August 1st, 2006, 02:28 PM

Hello
thank you all for postin comments and crits. its wery helpfull for me!!
I keep this thread updated by latest pieces.

Phuzion: thanks man, i try give my works that extra push...

Verithin: that clock fliped position is because idea of image is "Countdown machine"...i increase visiblity of basic idea next time.

Speedster: shure, i make some basic presentation of work process with some next images.

Doomgriever: "Alternativa" is Czech adventure game project situated mostly in Prague enviroments.

Here is another one, design of Police hovercraft for "Alternativa" game.

**Temujin** · August 2nd, 2006, 09:51 AM

Here is next free work... "Mobile mining machine"

**[void]** · August 2nd, 2006, 12:07 PM

I'm not to keen on the first 2 but the other 3 are awesome, I agree it would be cool to see the working process on these.

**Temujin** · August 2nd, 2006, 01:32 PM

Hello everyone

Here is work proces of some my works...sometimes simple lowpoly 3d scene is more than usefull, for perspective corrections, composition etc. its fast with good results.
Here it is, i hope it will be interesting for you.

...my website:
http://www.temujin.cz

**alti** · August 2nd, 2006, 01:40 PM

thanks for the process shots there.
sensational images so far

**Stark** · August 2nd, 2006, 02:30 PM

Looks cool. I like the style. Lighting is terrific!

**TheGnoll** · August 2nd, 2006, 02:57 PM

very nice "clean" works.My fav is the mobile mining machine, really fantastic.

ciao

**wheezy** · August 3rd, 2006, 09:37 AM

It has been said several times already but what is one more? The lighting is freaking impessive.

**vigostar** · August 3rd, 2006, 09:46 AM

On the contrary to phuzions comment I really enjoy seeing this clean style of work.. your environments are easy on the eye, and the four legges mechanical thing is done to perfection.... although I really dont like the dust/smoke by its legs. I think it could have used more smoke going vertically underneath the machines belly and some smoke covering a larger area of the ground but, lower to the ground... Im not sure if that makes sense or not but, I hope you understand what i mean... Great works.. please continue to post more

**Temujin** · August 6th, 2006, 11:43 PM

Hi people...thanks for commens!
im wery glad for that positive comments about lighting, i always try to make my work atmospheric.

...and here is some new pieces

http://www.temujin.cz

**Temujin** · August 19th, 2006, 09:49 AM

hello there
here is one of my previous posts nearly done as final game scene...
this scene is still WIP, without final textures, detals, backbround etc...
execution this game scene is work of Seth - one of ours game modelers.
this post maye shoult be in 3d section, but it works better as part of this game thread. scene is from "Alternativa" project

So , here is my concept...

...and here is WIP game scene:

http://www.temujin.cz