Total amateur trying to get back in the game

[Wouldbe Warrior Poet]

Here are a few images I have sketched lately. Only one of the bunch if complete and most have been sitting as sketches on my hard drive for some time (years, in a couple of cases). My main concerns are what I need to focus on in order to improve my sketching so that I can ultimately improve the final product. Any constructive input would be greatly appreciated.








I'm most interested in any input that might apply to the final image, as that is the latest in the bunch and the one I am wanting most to get correct and complete. Thanks for viewing.

[Wouldbe Warrior Poet]

A couple more...these are pure cartoons, but something I'm working on for what I hope will develop into a comic strip.


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If the image size is too large for what is generally acceptable here, please let me know and I will resize. Thanks for looking!

[Listing]

interesting work. You obviously have previous experience. In getting a good finished product, you usually have to work to preserve the initial impression (gesture and line quality, really). So, keeping that in mind, continue sketching, as much as you can from life.