She fell in the water

[ForeverMad]

hey everyone! im new here.
This is my version of SnowWhite, im not sure what should be in the background. But the picture is in the vein of the Pre-Raphealites
bye guys!

[kinjark]

Mad, welcome to CA. i like where this is going. next time you post an unfinished image its good to post it small enoguh to be seen all at once. i have to scroll up and down and i lose alot of info by doing so. i feel the dress is the most interesting part of this image. the face and the hair is seems busy. when i squnt my eyes the dress really pops out at me, but the face and hair just flatten out. simple values that describe form should come first then detail.

[ForeverMad]

thanks for the comments! i feel quite welcome.
i do think its funny that i think the opposite, i like the hair and face the best, the dress isnt right at all in my mind anyway