She's either got huge features or a tiny skull. Can we see the reference?
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That fat kid, hits it on the head - the shadow under the tip of the hat would look better if you could lighten it up slightly so you can just see the eyes.
Nose is a bit manly for my liking try something a bit more feminine (smaller)
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The hair is nice, but the hat needs a bit more, paZaZ!
Fruits maybe? (just jkin')
Thanks for the comments so far folks.
i agree the shadow needs to be lightened.
As to the features, I am having a bit of trouble on the sizing because I modified things a bit, to get rid of some of the effects of aging. Here is the reference.
And yes, the hat needs to be bigger, as is obvious now looking at it, but I missed it before![]()
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