First post comic book art

[OnTheEdge]

This is my first post, hopefully the pic will come out right. It is an un-shaded, un-inked drawing of batman and superman. Critiques are very welcome.

[vances22]

welcome to the sketchbook section. I think you need to get some life drawing classes going. its nice seeing a piece where you are trying to do everything out of your head, but your proportions, anatomy, gesture, aforshortening all improvement. I think you should concetrate on drawing real people from pose books and leave comics alone for a little while, cause remember if you can draw real people, you can draw anything, and then your concepting skills will be pimp. Keep posting though man, i would deffinatly love to see more work from youl.

[OnTheEdge]

Thanks for the critique, I’ll keep that in mind.