Desperately seeking paintovers

[TechLoveAffair]

Got a book by Eliot Goldfinger this Christmas! Whipped it out and did this little number(I can post a resized copy if thisn's too big). I've got a few crits of my own on there, but I'm not entirely sure of how to fix some of them. Paintovers are appreciated:

[mikeorion22]

hey the biggest problem is what you already have written, the body is for a muscular adult male and the head looks like more of a small child., i think if you post something more developed it might help people giving you critiques more of an idea what to work on, good luck

[alex_86]

HERE, YOU SCUM! HERE'S YOUR STINKIN PAINTOVER! LOL! JUST KIDDING!! I'm not big on learning bones, so that part might be wrong, but everything else is correct (though perhaps the head could still stand to grow a little, I was really thrown off by how small you had it).



Sorry he looks like he's jacking it!