Wet Shirt (Revision) WIP

[noiion]

Hello every one. Here's what I'm currently working on. I got a little carried away in detailing her shirt, so it looks like it's wet or she is wearing something extremely static. Anyways it loks kinda cool so I'll leave it like that. I still got a bit to go so C&Cs are greatly appreciated.

[MarkHarchar]

The shirt looks quite nice actually. Her hair is done well. I think that there is too large of a space between her eyes. Also, you have some light spots on her left side of her face that are not being expressed on the facial tattoo. Even when something is black, it shows up as shades of grey depending on how much light is hitting it. Keep going. Let's see it finished.

[noiion]

Thanks for the input, hylandr2. I'll work on those suggestions and posts some more updates pretty soon.

[noiion]

Hey,eneryone. Hope you guys had a Merry Christmas. I have posted the final version of the Wet Shirt Girl above. It's probably nothing big but at least it's a piece I can add to my portfolio. Once again, thanks for veiwing. Any C&Cs are still welcome and are greatly appreciated.
Noi

[BMunchausen]

The one on the upper left looks a little silly - her head looks distorted because the forehead's so big and her ears are SO high on her head! I think she could use some sense of creasing below her rib cage on the side that's being bent in - she looks like she's a touch plastic w/out it. I like the one on the bottom although she reminds me of Emma Watson (Harry Potter's Hermione Granger) for some reason.

[noiion]

Thanks for your post, BMunchausen. The first one was pretty bad, that's why I had to change her. Emma Watson, huh? I Haven't seen Harry Potter yet, been wanting to check them out but never got a chance to. I have to watch them now that you mentioned it.