Bundle of under 10 min life doodles

[jar]

This is a non-life doooodle

[Crawley]

hello, you've got alot going for you in some of these. you're not afraid to go after the head, hands and feet. but your drawing too dark. your lines arent confident enough to sketch that dark that fast, (neither are mine usually). you look like youre starting off with a 2b and going from there to a 4 or softer. until you get more line control it really helps to start off with a harder pencil like a hb or even into the h's. give it a try it will make alot easier when you start trying to do 20 min or longer poses. definately keep it up!