Ok, lets get this underway

**Sillage** · October 25th, 2005, 11:02 PM

Well, first post. Something new I am starting, influenced by Warmachine. Gotta say, excited about getting reviews by so many people. Thanks in advance.

**StealthNachos** · October 25th, 2005, 11:30 PM

I'm liking this start. What is it for?
What is that thingamajigger in the bottom left going to be? It really helps suggest size and depth.
Another thing, I don't think those tiny legs would hold that body, and as I'm sure you know, form should always follow function. Unless he uses all fours?

**Mono** · October 26th, 2005, 11:03 AM

develop it more. There's nothing i can really say til you flesh it out more.

**Liquidspider** · October 26th, 2005, 06:47 PM

well.. lesse... for one, hes gonna topple over

you need to add some juxtaposation.. or however its spelled with the hips..

if your shoulders are slanting the way they are, the hips should be slanting in the opposite way to counter the balance.. plus with those tiny feet, hes gonna bail!!

maybe have his left hand.. well 'left' when we look at it, on the ground? as if to help him balance more? like a gorilla!

interesting piece.. hope to see more