new snail

[Joey-b]

nother one
C&C welcome very welcome

[Rabid_Elf]

Nice. The shell blends in a bit with the mushroom though maybe a thin white line or a bit more of a highlight on the shell might pop it forward a bit more

[madster]

Joey,
This snail does not look any noticeably different from your other snails, except for coloring, and the addition of a very simplistic background. The round brush you used for the sky hurts the eyes, because it looks so blurred on the edges.

This work does not meet the development standards for CC, and, like the rest of your snails, is being moved to SWIPS. Although a bit more painted, these are little more than cartoony doodles. The fact that they all look basically the same does not help...

Also, since they are basically the same snail in different versions, and they are all for the same "project," please keep them all together in the same thread, instead of starting a new thread for each one. Thanks!

~M

[Joey-b]

rabid-elf thx allot.. hmm yeah ill c if i can something like that

madster - this aint a sketch and.. thx for not giving ANY crit lol just the bg wich was done on purpose.. r u loosing ur C&C skills?

[madster]

No, Joey, my C&C skills are a sharp and painful as ever, but like I said, this guy looks like 2-3 of your other snails. Same basic shape, same speckles, just no punk lip ring, or wings, and a different color scheme...
They're nice enough lil' snails, they just look too much the same. Kinda like "My Lil' Pony" collections. You seen one, you basically seen 'em all.

I also told you how the Painter circular brush you used looks very blurry and disconcerting to the eye.

Joey, there's just not that much effort put into this piece, whether you consider it complete or not. It's also just the latest in a string of similarly lackluster, although cute enough, snails...
I gave you what crits I could for what little you drew...I can't do no more than that, no matter HOW good my C&C skills are...

[Joey-b]

hmm pony snailz.. didt think of that yet.. yeah i know they look the same.. thats how they have to be hehe.. but still there is enough to crit just like every other drawing

and about not finishing the piece.. detailing isnt really needed cause the will be show at a rest 200x200 so..

but okey if u dont wanna then dont to bad.. i thought i'd might get u to crit some,



ow and.. i dont use painter.. and ill try and smoothen up the bg

[madster]

Not finished gets it moved here, Joey, you know that. Same for lack of detail/development...

And for the last time, if you don't provide any in-depth works, you won't get in-depth critiques, unless I have time to kill, and not much new on the boards. I gave you as in-depth as you gave me to look at...

You DID get crits. Two, now, along with two explanations of why they don't warrant any more comment. Which, for that matter, is my opinion of this thread.

~M