Celeste - Final opinions, major changes?

[Govinda]

HI everyone

I'm new to conceptart.org, and this is my first post here.

I have an almost finished piece that, if anyone has time out there, ifyou have any initial thoughts about it, I'd be very thankful to recieve

I've gotton mixed opionions on forums like this before, so I'm curious to know what the 'conceptart' public has to say.

Here is the picture:

'Celeste'
Digital



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Celeste 10


Thanks in advance for any help you may have

'Govinda'

[Govinda]

okay, I've made some final changes.

Any opinions anyone may have to finalize this picture would be most welcome

[R_M]

Hi Govinda,
interesting concept. I like the hair and the face, but the body feel wrong. there is something with the proportions, but it is rather difficult to point it out cause the weird angle. I think she is to wide, or it is like she is missing the lower part of her body.
the colors are nice, but boy did you choose a difficult position!

[Später]

Very nice!
I think your picture has a lot of atmosphere. And her face and hair is really beautifull... The right foot is a bit off though. I actually found it better in the first picture... But nice color and atmosphere :thumb:

[Tanika]

I love it! You might want to double check her legs/rear. I think something there is wrong, I don't know what that something is, but, I believe it is what RM was trying to point out.
Great concept, I love the shading and skin tones you did. :eek: and you shaded so well too. X.x Her eyes, no, face, is dazzling. Keep it up and check on what I suggested. It is a beautiful work!!!

[Govinda]

Thanks!!! I worked on her foot, and never got a chance to post the change

Here is my current version:




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Celeste - 12