red like hell

**airman** · August 22nd, 2005, 08:17 AM

long time no post here
comments please my last piece
i used photoshop 7
thanks.

**airman** · August 24th, 2005, 10:48 AM

no reply??

sorry for the double post

**Robert Ashley** · August 24th, 2005, 12:38 PM

here you go....a reply

**mull77** · August 24th, 2005, 01:26 PM

Don't worry about getting replys, most people come on to browse or post. Coming up with good c&c is tough to do in a hurry. Stick with it, the more you post and the better your stuff gets, the more people will take the time to say something.

Anyway, your's is a strange pic. I like the angle and the idea but it kind of flatters to decieve. The more i looked at it, the more i spotted problems. The anatomy (even for a made up character) is way off as is the forshortening. His right arm looks broken and his hands look a little flat.

It's obvous you have some skill and potential, but i think you might need to take some time out to do some life studies and really get to know the way the body is put together.

Keep posting!

**Tomoran** · August 24th, 2005, 01:57 PM

Although I like the picture, I have to agree with mull77. The musculature and articulation are a bit wonky, even for a cartoon-type rendering. I still can't figure out what is going on with his right arm. The coloring in some spots makes it difficult to differentiate the body parts and different muscles. I'm not sure I understand the background.

Again, I love it overall, it's just when you begin to really look at the picture closely, some issues pop up.