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    Hitman

    Been a while since I posted something :/

    Tried something new.



    C&C Most Appreciated

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    may i suggest you to sharpen your pencil

    but really; you use long and strong strokes but the lines are too thick (especially the contour lines) that it makes the drawing look like a 1-inch thumbnail blown up after scan. [well if this IS a thumbnail, just nevermind] the piece could surely use more details but it is definitely a good start. just lighten up a bit, and go darker as you work the details.

    keep up, nice start

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    Quote Originally Posted by e n d e r
    may i suggest you to sharpen your pencil
    Hahaha, I should try that sometime =D

    Thanks for the crits, Like I said, Its a new style for me, But I defintly will take your crits into consideration in my next peice.

    Eywallah

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    i liked it like that.. gives it a bit of personality..... -(the thick strokes that is..)

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    abi nerden olduğuna hiç dikkat etmemişim...

    you're welcome.

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