his left arm is bit too long, if you want his left arm to touch the ground, make him hunch over a little more.
Hey I like this piece-
the line work is good, the pose is easy to read and has a good sense of stylized life to it.
My biggest problem is his lower jaw which looks pretty well dislocated to me. It seems to be sticking out at a weird angle to the rest of his skull
Other than that...it looks pretty good.
Are you gonna colour it?
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i think you should move the screen left hand a little bit up or down.
the finger and the legs forms a pretty confusing tangent.
i suggest using value to seperate them as well.
the chains need to come over his body more...they are resting too shallowly currently.
i guess i'm assuming a lot...could be a she. either way...
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