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[nardsdesign]

2 robotic superheroes team up to fight super bugs.

[DSillustration]

the rendering is nice, but...
i am having real trouble envisioning these two figures together.
even if its a "montage-effect" you are going for,
they seem too unrelated.
the 168-thing is her shoulder, right?
where is the rest of her?

i would reasses the clarity of your illustration.
if your objective is not clear, the nice rendering just gets lost.

[ArtisticSchmidt]

I agree with DS. It's hard to read what's going on and the really cartoony guy doesn't fit with the Mangaesque chick. When I first saw it I thought that "shoulder" was a gun pointing at us. The coloring style and effects are pretty cool though. Perhaps just focus more on the sketching stage and you'll be set. I know a lot of times I get excited to move onto the final, just plan some more.

[Danilo]

I like it, Its not need to be clear. It is a style

[Smitherines]

The styles dont blend together, but the illustration and design of the peice is very nice

[nardsdesign]

I like it, Its not need to be clear. It is a style

yep that is really in my mind ' my intention' i dont want it to be clear i dont like to put more details' my thinking is to put some smoke effects or some lightning thunder etc, to cover up some of its blank space' to other guys i appreciate your comments thank you cheers!