Hi Everyone. Here's my latest work. I hope you like it.
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Hi Everyone. Here's my latest work. I hope you like it.
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There is no rain infront of her at all![]()
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What is lighting her face so brilliantly that it makes it flat (and bends her nose over against her right cheek), yet only slightly affects the hood in one small place?
Interceptor, there seems to be rain in front of her face, but not in front of her cloak. It's a very discriminating rain.
Infinitum, have you been reading the move to reform the Finally Finished section?
Dogfood is right. I think this belongs in the sketches/WIP section. No offense. But if you compare this to the higher quality images in this section...well...it just doesn't hold up. And as far as crits go. Others have pointed out the lighting and rain, but what about the flat, blob like quality of the robe? Use referance. If you can post on this thread, then you can go to google and type "cloak" or "hood".
Erm.... it looks like This had better be moved. Can I do that or do the moderators have to do it. Thanks for the advice everyone, I thought it was a finished piece but I can see all of you're points. I will make sure the next piece I post here is of a higher standard.
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