cute hat

**Punchy** · May 9th, 2005, 04:19 AM

some fan art from an obsure neo geo game. I tried to fix the last one based on some feedback from an older thread. Moved her jaw and ear around. not sure if I got it though. gah.

**ktk** · May 9th, 2005, 05:05 AM

I like the second one. It's cute

**DavidCousens** · May 9th, 2005, 06:20 AM

These are nice.

It may be an idea to resize the jpegs, make them a bit smaller so that they will fit on a screen without meeding to scroll.

**Arctis** · May 9th, 2005, 08:12 AM

Nice sketches, with lovely colors (especially the first one...)
Their attitudes are nice too, but some parts of the face are floating a bit. Take a look on how eyes are connected to skull, the skull connected to the nose, the nose to the mouth etc... Drawing a face needs a contruction.
Bye.

**Elwell** · May 9th, 2005, 08:30 AM

All three of these have a real feeling of personality, and the color choices are good.
There's no reason they have to be posted so big.
The linework seems choppy and tentative. I'd like to see it either less important or better.
The last one's ear is still badly constructed and in the wrong place.

There's a lot right with these pieces, and the things that are wrong are mostly a matter of experience, so keep it up.

**lwjacob** · May 9th, 2005, 08:33 AM

to draw faces from some positions certainlly is hard. the 2nd girl is wrong sketched. look well at her hair. ull notice that somethings wrong with it. i liked the 3rd one, except for her mouth. its wrongly traced.

**legacy** · May 9th, 2005, 09:35 AM

love the feeling coming from the third piece. The only thing that gets me is the hair, i wish it was finished

That and her earring isn't connected to her ear

Great color though, what game was this from?

**Punchy** · May 9th, 2005, 01:53 PM

ktk : thanks, glad you liked her.

DaveTheOriginal : doh. didn't think that 800x800 was large. I'll post em smaller next time. sorry bout that.

Arctis : thanks for the advise. yeah, I need to take an anatomy class.

Elwell : Thanks for the crit. I'll have to do more with the line wieght, heheh, I such with ears, they always turn into a mass of spoo. Thanks for the encouraging words! =)

lwjacob : thanks for the feedback.

legacy : thanks, yeah, I need to finish the hair and redraw that ear....as soon as I figure out where it goes=) Glad you liked the color, Its from a game called rage of dragons...which is a sort of sequel to a double dragon fighting game.