Truck With a Twist

**sambrade** · April 16th, 2005, 08:22 PM

Vehicle Concept. Rendered using tria markers :: pen :: pencil crayon ::photoshop.

**Frank.Xu** · April 16th, 2005, 09:08 PM

Many beautiful painting!

**Storyboard Dave** · April 17th, 2005, 03:37 AM

Watch that front fender. It almost looks as though it couldn't accomodate that front wheel moving under there.

I'd also be a little more critical of the fabric in the figure. The drapery on the guy looks forced. For as much detail is on the vehicle, the figure seems to fall a little flat in comparison and almost looks cartoonish.

I'd also look at the red shape you've got in the background. I want to follow the right side of it down to encapsulate the vehicle. It seems to flow awkwardly into the back of the vehicle's "ladder" (?).

**Danilo** · April 17th, 2005, 06:54 AM

Nice render, but drawing is off. It seems that you dont understand what you draw.
I suggest that first do some scatches from different angles. And when start main piece, define horison.

ANyway I like idea.

**sambrade** · April 17th, 2005, 11:37 AM

Thanks for the comments. In regards to the front fender i did alter this on following versions as it is a little tight under there lol. Also i agree with the red background and will change it accordingly. The figures in the picture are only there to serve as props hence why they are not detailed etc, (hope u understand) the main focus is the vehicle. The comment regarding the drawing is off and i don't know what I draw is ridiculous. if you don't like something fine but be specific. This is just a none comment which makes out that there is nothing positive what so ever. I checked out your work and I think you should take some of your own advice before commenting. Thanks once agian for the constructive comments.