Some of my recent stuff.

[Lohan]

Hi, this is some stuff I've been doing recently. I just got my wacom a couple weeks ago, as well as painter. I am currently trying to gather money to attend sva hehee. All comments appreciated..

My first try at an environment... It looks very kiddy I think.



A quick sketch from reference...



Badly trying to copy the Wind Waker style of art... Going for kind of cutesy look.



Again for the Zelda look. This is my first finished, FULL illustration, so I'm kind of pleased with it. But nobody seems to like it lol. Oh well




Well there you go

[Lohan]

bump. i would love to know where I'm going worng with these. please critique

[MennoKnight]

I really like that first one, it is a bit kiddy but theres nothing wrong with that. However I dont understand how the lower tree is supposed to be. The higher trees foliage looks to far left (not that Ive got anything against communists) You could also define the foliage more and show more roots.

Id like to mention that the sails of the ship would be completely useless.

[Lohan]

thankyou very much for the comments.

as for the rest: sadness