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    Work in progress: Criticism appreciated

    Hey, this is my first post.
    I would like some constructive criticism for this pic, im kind of stuck.. What needs to be improved? Is the colour of the face okey?

    Sorry for the link, dont know how to attach pics though.
    www.lodarstorm.net/1.jpg

    Thx! //Ben

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    like this:



    use the img button up top (the one that looks like mountains) then insert the address of the image.

    i'd make the images smaller though. kind of hard to see unless it fits relatively on the screen.
    Hey dog. . . . did you see the size of that chicken?!

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    First off, before I can crit anything, i dont know what im looking at. Is this a caricature of someone, or is it something out of ur head, i just dont know?

    Dont get so detailed so early on with the hair n lips etc, just block in the main colours and values so u can build up on that.

    Until I know a bit more about this, thats all i can say really.

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    Hey, thx for the replys. Oh, great! Now I know how to add the pics, thanks.

    Cocofuppa, this is just something out of the head. Not really know what its supposed to be.. Thx for the critics!

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