this is a drawing done for a battle between jeffny and I. against all odds is the name of the piece.
comments always welcome.
-a vigoStaR p r o d u c t i o n
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Level 16 Gladiator: Spartacus' Retiarii
this is a drawing done for a battle between jeffny and I. against all odds is the name of the piece.
comments always welcome.
-a vigoStaR p r o d u c t i o n
Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd
SketchBook
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...d.php?t=237554
So friggen sweet, I like the background's contrast and level of detail in the rendering
sweet stuff
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Level 4 Gladiator: Meridiani
Lovely shading and color. BIC pens have always worked nice to get clean shading. My only problem is your porportions and foreshortening, they're off, and its almost confusing
I don't pray because I don't want God to know where I'm at.
Not even a wannabe, just like to draw
Level 8 Gladiator: Thracian
Man I'm going to have to go through hell to beat you in the thunderdome
Oh... poor demon that doesn't know that the pen is mightier than the sword
Hm to find something to nitpick about... must taunt youcheck out the knuckles on the demons left hand... looks like they´re between the fingers... you didn´t on his right hand.
Well I gotta practice some more
see ya
Last edited by Mindflaw; January 22nd, 2005 at 07:39 PM. Reason: forgot to write out a word
My sketchbook flawed to the max page 5
Ps:Hope you understand my English.
Remember my advices taste best with a grain of salt.
vicious lightning claws!!!
Level 10 Gladiator: Equites
the dudes torso is way too long, and he seems to have an inverted ass. work on anatomy. Also the demons hand, the one holding the crayon, is in a very awkward position, itd prolly be better in fron of his leg. also, the dudes cloak/jacket looks very weird. ott your shading is very nice.
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Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
hey, thanx for the views and the comments... When I was working on this I noticed that the perspective and forshortening on the demons hand/ arm was off... there really wasnt much i could do at that point having it rendered in pen. Also, the comment made about the hand being in an awkward position is true.... But, i thought if i put it in front it would have looked even more awkward.... Thats all part of the learning process right..!? And that whole ass thing.... i was driving myself crazy trying to figure out what to do with that and ultimately made he bad decision of leaving it alone.. theres always next time.. oh and mindflaw... Which hand looks better?? Or which one were you talking about?? The one holding the crayon?
Not even a wannabe, just like to draw
Level 8 Gladiator: Thracian
heh didn't see that it was a crayon before you said itthought it to be the sheat of a sword...weird must examine my brain some day
anyway I meant the hand not holding the crayon. I thought it would be easier to explain what I meant with a pic
My sketchbook flawed to the max page 5
Ps:Hope you understand my English.
Remember my advices taste best with a grain of salt.
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