begining of man

[DCON]

i call this one "Rise of Chromagnum"
http://www.zoombatuu.com/jpgs/rise_of_chromagnum.jpg





this is an illustration that i've been working on for a lil wile.

Let me know what you guys think so far?

[dogfood]

I like it, so far. The composition is good (the tried and true triangle) and the figures (especially Howie Long on the right) aren't bad.
The mountains are kind of bothering me, though, especially the "Nightmare Before X-mas" one to the right.
The sense of foreshortening on the main figure, too, is not quite appealing. His arms are larger than his legs and his head is the size it would be if it were at eye level. It also appears that he's about to fall over, vice swing a mighty blow.
The guy with his back to us doesn't look very threatening (which is probably a good thing if our hero is about to fall over) or very interesting. He seems to be an afterthought.
It's cool, though.

[DCON]

thanks... i'll consider your comments when i get back on it, the main figure is supose to be a neandethal man .... not really a modern man so i based his looks on the actual species.
the other guys are suppose to be chromagnum (modernman)