Hell (2d ani)

[kasap]

Hi, i did this 2d animated intro of 6pack in old skool Mtv styl and i was looking for crits on the designe of the creatures and the colours.
the thing is i kept on changing the creatures while i was animating to save me some time and workload so they became simpler and simpler but i think that was ok because they weren't that long visible on screen most of the time, the movement came first the designe came second in the end, anyway im curious about what you think.

http://www.6pack.tv/cnt.asp?c=movies...e=2&s=showcase

[Eew]

as im noob first i say this -> hehe thats totaly kicks ass !! i specialy liked that giant monster and when i saw that 2 dudes in one made me laught ! so i think you did good job
now for some real crits : i dont know why but it looks kinda not finished and specialy every end of every scene there is like a moment 1-2 secs where nothing happends and i only see that last frame of the scene ...that realy doesnt works good with the animation of charachters .. but charachters are animated very well if you ask me and now for the idea = cool

[BlueMech]

Nice simple syle, I've never heard of 6-pack before. I'll have to look into them now...

[Spacemanchuck]

Great little animation!!! Loved it!!!

[kasap]

thanks for the kind words.
Eew, the pauses in some scene's are too long your right that botherd me too i wanted too strecht the movement a bit further instead of nothing happenin but a deadline and the fact it didnt bother anyone but me kept me from fixing it.