New Illustrations

**Adam Masterman** · March 14th, 2013, 11:02 AM

Hey all, had a few newer finished pieces that I'd love to get some feedback on. These first two are concept pieces for a fantasy comic I'm developing for phones and devices:
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This piece was for an independent comics project, and their kickstarter campaign:
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And this was more or less a fun piece, a tribute to the much-mailgned 1990s:
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Crits and comments most welcome, thanks for looking,

Adam

**samthemule** · March 14th, 2013, 01:23 PM

I like it!

Aaaand,
I have a suggestion! Draw the observer into an area of the picture with a greater amount of detail/ color saturation/ focus in one area of the picture, somewhere around the centre/ wherever you think is important.

I would do a paintover but you know... I think you can imagine & see what I mean.

**Jeff Lafferty** · March 15th, 2013, 06:10 AM

Very cool work! Great style.

-Jeff

**Adam Masterman** · March 15th, 2013, 09:22 PM

Originally Posted by samthemule

I like it!

Aaaand,
I have a suggestion! Draw the observer into an area of the picture with a greater amount of detail/ color saturation/ focus in one area of the picture, somewhere around the centre/ wherever you think is important.

I would do a paintover but you know... I think you can imagine & see what I mean.

Thanks, man; appreciate it, and I do see what you mean about focal points.

Originally Posted by Jeff Lafferty

Very cool work! Great style.

-Jeff

Thanks; glad you like it.