cerverus

[seawave]

hi there,
these are some photos of my sculpt in progress.. i tried to take the photos as i could better so you can see the fur.. its not finished yet, your opinion matters..

[Daozang]

Very nice texture!
I really like it

[seawave]

thanks man!!!

[Notophthalmus]

Overall looking good- the fur is excellent- but there are a few anatomical issues. First, the musculature of the front legs is awkward; there is a big mass of muscle on the upper limb but it seems to be distributed too much in front of the humerus, and ends too abruptly above the elbow.

The heads also need some work. The eyes are too forward-looking for a long-faced canine; wolves and wolf-like dogs have eyes that face somewhat to the sides- not as much as a deer or horse, but more than a human. That's fine if it's a design decision, but it feels a little cartoony to me.

More seriously, the jaws are jointed in the wrong place. The jaws of a dog are jointed at the back of the skull, allowing a wider gape, while Cerverus' jaws appear to be jointed just behind the mouth opening, only halfway to the back of the skull.

I hope this is helpful! Your sculpture shows real promise, you just need to fine-tune the anatomy a bit.

[seawave]

thanks a lot! you really helped me! nowadays i am gonna complete the fur and the collars.. after i am gonna fix these anatomy problems.. i will send new pictures when i start so yo can see..

[Falc]

Just one word for this ............... Awesome.
Really man you did an outstanding work , i must say that it is the real art. Hat off to you man

[seawave]

thanks man! soon i am going to upload new photos with some anatomy corrections according to Notophthalmus and the collars..

[seawave]

here is some update.. i've made some corrections to the eyes and the jaws of the two of three heads and added collars.. have more work to do but thats an update..