Landscape: you could make use of atmospheric perspective which means that distant objects tend to go to the bluish side.
Mushrooms: this streak - is this the gesso of your painting surface? If yes then you could scrape or sand it before painting to get it smoother because this streak is distracting.
Drawings: how about making these more refined? Don't want to say that they aren't good but can you go the extra steps to make a drawing more refined? Head: what medium did you use? Colored pencils or pastels?
Figure: a cooler background would let her pop out. The shadow colors that you have chosen are cool - that means that the background was somewhat cool too - is that correct?
And if you decide to make the background cooler then make it smooth - so this would make a nice contrast to the roughness of the figure.
Good decicion to make the area on her left arm brighter so that the contours becam clear.
Cat: really cute! And the composition is also great. But the colors are somewhat dirty - how did you photograph it?
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Great paintings Mathieu - About the landscape - atmospheric perspective , as the last fellow said , plays and important part as it gives you a sense of distance, but still , a nice study.
The Portrait could've used some saturated hues of orange , like an outline to make it pop out better.
The Still Life looks great and so does the cat study.
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@ bjoern3000 and Rostas.
You are right about the atmospheric perspective. All seem on the same plan.
For the drawings, i use pencils pastels (just 4 differents colors). But the orange is probably to strong.
For the Mushrooms, i use paper recovered of gesso. But i don't see the streak before i start painting.
I need to more refined but my problem is the time. For the figure, i am often limited (between 45 min to 3h max) and i am too slow in the first step. I have also difficulties with my touch. The results is never what i expected.
For the cat, the photography is not good. I must change the photography.
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