The first thing that I noticed that could be improved is the anatomy of the figure. The form of the legs is really hard to read - the right leg in particular is very strangely shaped. Then you have her head turned around in a way that feels unnatural for the pose, maybe even physically impossible. Trying it out myself, I have to strain my neck to twist that far without moving my torso. It helps to stand in front of a mirror and act out the character yourself. If someone showed up behind you, how would you physically turn to look? You would probably turn one leg out and turn your torso so your shoulder moves with you as you turn your head to look. The figure should work as a unit, not a collection of parts.