Vayne's new sketchbook, I love critique !! (updated: may 17, 2013)

[vayne108]

Hello Conceptart.org I haven't been around here in a while. Allot of things have changed for me throughout this passage of time. I guess thats why I've decided to move on from my old sketchbook. Allot of the work I was doing doesn't represent me as a person anymore and I feel that there was a looming of negativity for me left in my old thread (The negativeity I'm speaking of has nothing to do with the users of CA. It's more of something that me and a few others would understand). Anyways I hope that this new thread is a fresh start and that my art will improve !!!!

First off some of my 2D works I've done recently:















Next is some of my 3d work done in zbrush:













I hope that you guys enjoy my works ^_^ !

[Theodor]

I like your color schemes. I like mythological creatures that are beautiful to look at, instead of undead all the time! I don't know anything about z-brush but I like the textures of the wood and dried earth. Good luck on the new SB! Off to a good start!

[vayne108]

I like your color schemes. I like mythological creatures that are beautiful to look at, instead of undead all the time! I don't know anything about z-brush but I like the textures of the wood and dried earth. Good luck on the new SB! Off to a good start!

Thanks, and I very much think that undead things are gross and horrid and I prefer to avoid that. While, I hope it does get a good start thanks ^_^ !

[Dawood Marion]

Your creatures are beautiful, innocent and peaceful looking. Love it... Keep it up!!

[vayne108]

Your creatures are beautiful, innocent and peaceful looking. Love it... Keep it up!!

Thanks, I will try by best.

[Harmageddon]

I like your creatures; nice and friendly cartoony style, it has potential.
Try and work with bolder shadows and more color contrast with the background.
I think you've done that best with the black/white parrot griffon thingy.
But with the fox for example, the light on his back comes from another direction than the light on his tail. It's hard to get that right, so all I can say is practice !

[vayne108]

I like your creatures; nice and friendly cartoony style, it has potential.
Try and work with bolder shadows and more color contrast with the background.
I think you've done that best with the black/white parrot griffon thingy.
But with the fox for example, the light on his back comes from another direction than the light on his tail. It's hard to get that right, so all I can say is practice !

YaY, practice ! thats no problem. Besides what you mentioned i think I need more practice on human faces.

[AlexTooth]

Wow some really really great stuff, very nice drawings indeed and that 3d is fantastic, keep workin' hard!

[vayne108]

Wow some really really great stuff, very nice drawings indeed and that 3d is fantastic, keep workin' hard!

Thanks, I will !

[vayne108]

Here, my updates for today. I should really update way more often...... Anyways I hope you guys enjoy !

#1: Sketch dump: some random drawing at the bottom, that I drew when watch a documentary on helvetica in class. and the others are life drawings and gestures from the saturday drawing clinic at my college.

Seee....... last image...........for pic.

#2: A WIP of my characters: This is WIP (Work in progress) piece of my OCs Silva and her hawk Ivan they are planning routes for Silva's next job. She had a tough night the night before on another job she is very tired and a little cranky.



#3: Owl of the Wood: My finished version of the 3d piece that I posted earlier in my sketchbook.

[krypt]

very nice colours for the paintings! 3D creatures really well scuplted!! Thanks for sharing!

[vayne108]

very nice colours for the paintings! 3D creatures really well scuplted!! Thanks for sharing!

Thank you and your welcome !!

[Magyar]

Woah those 3D drawings are seriously good! Keep going and well done

[Fernteixeira]

your dinossaur and yours 3d works looks awesome !

[vayne108]

Woah those 3D drawings are seriously good! Keep going and well done

Thanks, and I hope you keep going too !!

[vayne108]

your dinossaur and yours 3d works looks awesome !

Thank you, Fernteixeira !!!

[Wassim]

Hey there
thanks for commeting on my sb , i see awesome sketches here
keep rocking ;D

[Vonzent]

You got some interesting work going on here, I particularly enjoyed the 3D moderling.

[Devrak]

Hey, very cool start on your new sketchbook! Your creatures are very nice, I especially like the raptor Topaz, very nicely done. No crits, except that you could practice on human faces, but really, who doesn't? Too damn hard, that's what they are.

Good job, keep going!

[vayne108]

Hey there
thanks for commeting on my sb , i see awesome sketches here
keep rocking ;D

Your very welcome !!!! and thanks, I'll try my best !!!

[vayne108]

You got some interesting work going on here, I particularly enjoyed the 3D moderling.

Thanks !!

[vayne108]

Hey, very cool start on your new sketchbook! Your creatures are very nice, I especially like the raptor Topaz, very nicely done. No crits, except that you could practice on human faces, but really, who doesn't? Too damn hard, that's what they are.

Good job, keep going!

Thanks, and yes agreed !!

[poetry man]

Your zbrush work is lookin good! I also like your creativity with animals. I'm not too fond of the stylization, but it looks like a cool style to render in. Keep pressin with us all man!

Peace!

[vayne108]

I'm sorry I've been so dead here recently I've been a busy college girl. College throws allot at me flash animation, write long, I mean lllloooonnngggg business planss...... EEk I sure do hate writing it stresses me out and gives bad writes block.

Anyways here what I have for you today:

#1 Toucan aniamtion: First an animation I did while applying some things I learned in my flash class



#2 Frog anthro sketch: I did during class in my business practices notebook. I think I will do more with this character. I really like him !!

#3 Lion character: Just something random. I felt like drawing a lion and this is what came out.

#4 Character moment WIP v2: an update to my earlier post.

[r zanchetin]

Damn I like these colours you use, and I dig that 3d owl. ALOT!
And nice to see another Flash crazy user! Mind if I ask how many frames are you doing on that animation?

[vayne108]

Damn I like these colours you use, and I dig that 3d owl. ALOT!
And nice to see another Flash crazy user! Mind if I ask how many frames are you doing on that animation?

Thanks ^_^ and for the animation I used 190 frames total, most of the animation is in 2s except for a few places here and there.

[Kungfoowiz]

Liked your lion painting, you kitted him out with a set of braids, sweet! =)

[vayne108]

Liked your lion painting, you kitted him out with a set of braids, sweet! =)

Thanks, ^_^ !!

[vayne108]

#1, Lioness: Here is a wip I'm working on for an Points commission over on Deviantart.com.

[vayne108]

* Runs and screams in panic !!!!!!!! *

#1, Lounging: I can't believe I almost forget to post this........ anyways he is one of my Original characters (His name is Robby vayne. hence my username) for a story me and my sister are working on together. He is just kind of hanging out and having a conversion with someone off page. He is a hunter for a small village located in the wilderness. He is a friend to nature and keeps a balanced view of the animals and gives them respect even though he hunts them.