My very first animation, please critique.

[rawshark]

Hello, I'm new here and new to animation. To get right to it I recently made my very first animation in adobe flash for the intro and outro of a friends youtube videos.

Watch them here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=68xmRyOPQQM

Please could you inform me of reason why I suck and how I can do better. Thanks.

[Widdershins]

It's a simple flash intro, and it's okay for a first go. The timing on the the letters falling is totally off though, and I would shorten the whole thing.