first animation (critique required)
Hello guyz!
first time in my life i made animation for TAD contest on Deviantart C:
I didnt win, but i got in semi-final) I am happy with that so much!
I need constructive critique about composition. My anatomy not perfect, i am working on it.
I need some advices how to improve storyline.
tools used: | pencil HB / paper | colored - PT SAI | animation - PS CS4 |
traditional animation
Thanks to everyone!
link on animation(impossible to upload here):
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...er-d5n1tph.gif
Last edited by mintwinter; January 23rd, 2013 at 12:15 AM.
Reason: can't insert image
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