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    Talonhardin is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
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    Another one hungry for Critiques.

    Thank you so much! Any critiques would be taken to heart. Need to learn as much as I can. Thank you!

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    Okay Overall I really like the way this piece has the appearance of an old 'traditional' painting.

    However what sets me off a bit is the dragon, I like the shading on it on how it's scales/flesh reflect the light but It's anatomy seems a bit off.

    It seems a bit on the chubby and stout side plus the wings look a tad bit too short to fly (I'm not sure if this was intended or not)

    So If this was meant to be a flying dragon I would recommend larger wings on it in general, that would make it seem more realistic because most animals that can fly have wings that are rather large.

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    Talonhardin is offline Registered User Level 1 Gladiator: Andabatae
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    Hello! Thank you so much @Windaki for the crit! means a lot. Il do a lot more studies before doing a piece like this next time thank you thank you!

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