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    lighting/color/anatomy crits!

    I'm having a little bit of trouble with lighting and coloring! And any anatomy critiques would be much appreciated.

    Also, any advice for backgrounds? I'm trying to work on that too...!!! It's still a work in progress, so it's really, really rough!

    Thanks for helping!
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    Neither lighting or anatomy are really evident here. Given this style you've chosen, I'd simplify the anatomy a lot but opt for more accurate lighting.

    Pick where your light source is, to begin with.

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    I agree about the lighting. Perhaps identifying the light as being a dramatic light directly above them would help you finish the piece.

    The structure of the man face is very nice though. It's got like a classic comic book look to it.

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    The man's hand seems kind of humongous. Try putting the heel of your hand on your chin and see how far up your forehead your fingertips land. I really like their faces.

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