Jackk's Sketchbook

[MrJackk]

Hi, starting out here with a couple of characters-mech designs

[hallowtreez]

wow very cool stuff man. im a fan of melee mechs how long have you been drawing?

[velvetcat]

very cool, I love the messy sketchy look

[MrJackk]

Thanks for your replies, I've been drawing for a couple of years, but I just came back from a 4 years break.

[Deceptive]

Nice sketchbook!

I like the accentuation of the line!

Keep em coming!

[MrJackk]

Thanks, here is the refined board

[kingkostas]

lovely thumbnails!!! Great start to a sketchbook . Keep sharing

[ceddo]

These are fan-freakin-tastic Please continue!

[MrJackk]

Thanks a lot guys, I'll keep going for sure

[MrJackk]

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[Deceptive]

Nice environments Jack!
Gonna follow this sketchbook for sure!

[MrJackk]

Thanks for your comment !

[xiw]

wow I like it a lot, nice robots

[MrJackk]

Thank for your comment xiw !

[MrJackk]

[LtPlissken]

Hey buddy, this looks awesome, too good for my understanding. Are you a pro?
I know that you said that you were away for four years but this is just outstanding.
Please work and post more, I will try to follow.

[MrJackk]

Thanks a lot for your comment, I'm willing to work in entertainment industry, but I'm far from pro. More coming soon ! thanks for following.

[kevin_]

cool sb, really like the vehicle work! keep it up, looking forward to more!

[MrJackk]

Been working all day long on this girl. I'm terrible at drawing sexy girls and neat painting, so i tried both in one, though i'm not convinced. Will trill to colorize later.

[I.N.K.]

Hey man, thanks for checking out my sketchbook. Your mech designs rock, especially the ones in #6 !
But I think the face of the girl in your last post needs some changes. It looks a bit weird to me, the nose seems really flat and the eyes seem to be too far away from each other. Everything else seems great though and I like her pose a lot. I'm not sure what you mean with 'neat painting', it doesn't look all too rushed or messy to me?

[Mewball]

really nice polish in post #6. good job.

[MrJackk]

@I.N.K : Thanks i have been struggling with her face a lot I'm not good at this at all; it need some refine for sure, thanks for your input.
@Mewball : Thank you

[SeriousMalz]

The last painting needs a little more work but still looks good so far.
Great mecha and char desgins! Especially post #4 ^^.

[rumpenstiltzkin]

great sketchbook here! liking those mecha designs, and nice colors of the enviros too!

[LtPlissken]

It’s an outstanding thing that you chose to work greyscale, and of course I like the subject.
You are very good with laying down values and contrast.
Composition vise, I think that it should be more space ahead of her, than behind her on the canvas.
Keep on going with this one,
cause it looks very promising.

[MrJackk]

@ALL : Thanks guys, I have reworked the previous image following all your advices, I hope it looks better
@I.N.K : Thanks, reworked her face. About the "neat" stuff, I'm kinda working on my level of patience on one piece. I'm trying to render something a little bit polished
@LtPlissken : I'm terrible with colors at the moment, but I want to colorize her afterwards, I remade the composition !


WIP

[chevy28360]

Looking great! Really loving your mech sketches and thumbs. Would love to see some studies as well. Keep posting!

[MrJackk]

Here it is, done ! Thanks for your advice and remarks

[Baconstrap]

Goodday sir. I like the stuff you got here. Like the rendering on the last one. One tip aboat that piece, is that you could have made the "pelvis-spots" on the more visible since she's kinda thin(you can check it out a photo) also put a litltle bit darker value in the navel. Anyway nice work mate. If you don't understand what I mean feel free to ask. keep up the good work.

Stay bacon.