Honda Rivera-Art Center Portfolio (crit welcome)

[hondamoo]

Hi, I am applying to go to Art Center in Spring 2013, my portfolio is as so far. Any Crit is welcome.

[scrt_AgentMan]

I'm hoping to go to Art Center in the future and this past week I went to visit the campus, I spoke with an admissions counselor about entrance portfolios, (maybe you have already) Hopefully I can offer some tips as to what she said.

Is this for entertainment design? If it is, I would say you need some vehicles and environments to really round-out the portfolio, The counselor said that they really look for a full fleshed out story and not just one or two parts, adding a page that has some back-story wouldn't hurt either. The pages you have so far look good but its just really character heavy right now and could use some diversity.

[hondamoo]

oh yes thank you for the crit! I know, I have been working on the vehicles and environments right now, I was just posting my current finished work for a WIP Crit I guess. c: ( I haven't posted the environment/vehicles pages so far)